A is for Actors - so you need to talk about how the characters will be told to behave, act, and so on. Think about expressions, poses, body-language. This is very important stuff.
'normality' not 'normailcy' (lighting)
In the lighting section you may wish to describe the 2 scenes a little clearer for it to come together
Make Up - what make up are you putting on them? Beads of sweat? Blood? Mascara? Be clear...
Props is a bit basic, and Settings haven't been discussed at all.
Images are needed to support points
Finally, can we ensure that all 4 of you are doing as much work as each other, and that we get filming soon (and make it excellent - don't rush through it all)
A is for Actors - so you need to talk about how the characters will be told to behave, act, and so on. Think about expressions, poses, body-language. This is very important stuff.
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In the lighting section you may wish to describe the 2 scenes a little clearer for it to come together
Make Up - what make up are you putting on them? Beads of sweat? Blood? Mascara? Be clear...
Props is a bit basic, and Settings haven't been discussed at all.
Images are needed to support points
Finally, can we ensure that all 4 of you are doing as much work as each other, and that we get filming soon (and make it excellent - don't rush through it all)
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Much better although still nothing on Settings which is a big issue - not just for this but for your filming!
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