More emphasis on the comedy side of things required. Yes it is an action film but it's all done very satirically.
Diegetic sound needs more attention, you may want to change the ordering as discussed, be clear why you're including other texts, check spelling (always) and get more images in to support.
More emphasis on the comedy side of things required. Yes it is an action film but it's all done very satirically.
ReplyDeleteDiegetic sound needs more attention, you may want to change the ordering as discussed, be clear why you're including other texts, check spelling (always) and get more images in to support.
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Where is your box office data etc?
ReplyDeleteWhere is your generic conventions post?
Have you updated/improved any of the things I marked? You need to. You're in danger of falling behind.